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Little Do They Know
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Every day I hear their whispers
They bounce around my head
Getting louder and louder
Every time they're said
My skull is exploding with their words
Little do they know
Every time their words are said
I get closer and closer
They don't realise the crippling effect
Their words have especially when repeated
I am within a hair of following their orders
Or answering their question
Why don't you go kill yourself already?
What do you condone suicide
Why should I listen to you
You have no idea how close I am
Don't push me
Please
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More of a vent I wrote during the school year. I'm sorry.
I would like to look into using this in contests so any possible feedback you can provide would be great.
I would like to look into using this in contests so any possible feedback you can provide would be great.
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It's intense and well written